Zen Liturgy

I am currently working on the Liturgy for the Five Mountain Sangha and am exploring the connections of the Caodong and Linji Lineages. I have entered into collaboration with the Boundless Way Zen Project and have discovered that their Liturgy is much more significant to English Speaking Westerners. Based upon this I have begun to explore the English translations of the liturgy that was inherited from Zen Master Seung Sahn through Korea.
I have turned to my friend, Robert Buswell, PhD, for his work on the liturgy in his book "The Zen Monastic Experience." I have taken some liberties, but am using his core of translation for some of the content to the new Liturgy for the Five Mountain Sangha. I am including the four great vows as their representation moved my after reviewing their representation in his Appendix.
The Four Expansive Vows
[Hapchang; bow at end]
Sentient beings are numberless;
We vow to save them all.
Delusions are endless;
We vow to cut through them all.
The teachings are infinite;
We vow to learn them all.
The Buddha way is inconceivable;
We vow to attain it.
Sentient beings of my own self nature;
I vow to save them all.
Delusions of my own self nature;
I vow to cut through them all.
The teachings in my own self nature;
I vow to learn them all.
The Buddha way of my own self nature;
I vow to attain it.
Homage to the Buddhas who abide
eternally in the ten directions.
Homage to the Dharmas that abide
eternally in the ten directions.
Homage to the Sanghas that abide
eternally in the ten directions.
[Hapchang; bow at end]
Sentient beings are numberless;
We vow to save them all.
Delusions are endless;
We vow to cut through them all.
The teachings are infinite;
We vow to learn them all.
The Buddha way is inconceivable;
We vow to attain it.
Sentient beings of my own self nature;
I vow to save them all.
Delusions of my own self nature;
I vow to cut through them all.
The teachings in my own self nature;
I vow to learn them all.
The Buddha way of my own self nature;
I vow to attain it.
Homage to the Buddhas who abide
eternally in the ten directions.
Homage to the Dharmas that abide
eternally in the ten directions.
Homage to the Sanghas that abide
eternally in the ten directions.
